You are viewing [info]jo_graham's journal

Previous Entry | Next Entry

The Ides of March

hand of isis 2
It's the Ides of March -- commemorate it by buying Hand of Isis! :)

Seriously, though -- this morning I rewatched on YouTube one of the older versions of Caesar's eulogy -- young Marlon Brando as Marcus Antonius giving Shakespeare's immortal funeral oration. Several readers have asked me, "How do you go about writing characters who are so iconic, so well known, without the ghosts of all past portrayals of Caesar being there for comparison?"

The answer is that they are there. One of the differences between writing Hand of Isis and Black Ships is that we are much more familiar with Cleopatra, Julius Caesar and Marcus Antonius than with any of the characters in the Aeneid. So the challenge becomes how to do something fresh and different with them while staying true to what we know about them from historical sources. One thing I did was to put them in different situations, to choose to show different scenes than the iconic ones. Rather than the expected scene between Cleopatra and Julius Caesar in Alexandria, with her delivered to him in a rug, I gave the screen time to this one instead.

This was the first scene written in Hand of Isis, back in 2005, and it's one of my favorite Caesar bits. In which Cleopatra sends Charmian to talk to Caesar in Alexandria while they are his prisoners, hoping that Charmian will find an opening they can use.



This villa, like so many, was built to catch the sea breezes. In better times, doubtless it was a lovely place to set out couches and little tables, and dine in the sea air, with the soft scents of the garden below. There were no couches or tables now, only a sentry at each end of the building, the cressets unlit, as they would interfere with their night vision over the shaded garden. Still, the waning moon was bright enough that it hardly mattered.

I walked out to the rail and took a deep breath, clear and cool, like drinking moonlight.

I was not alone. His hair was a loose cap of silver, and he stood by the rail as well, some little way away, looking out over the garden. From the other side of the villa we should have been able to see Pharos and the sea, but this side looked the other way, toward the Mareotic Canal with its long lines of barges, bringing the grain of the Black Land endlessly to the sea. It was Caesar.

“Who’s there?” he said sharply, one hand dropping to his waist, to a dagger I did not see. Romans have assassins too.

I stepped out into the bright moonlight, my open hands held well away from my sides. “It is only I, Imperator.” My white himation shone in the darkness. No assassin would wear such.

His hand stilled. “You are one of her handmaidens,” he said. “I’ve seen you. Charmian, is it?”

“It is,” I said, inclining my head. I wished he did not know my name. It was better to be anonymous, a shadow behind Cleopatra. But then, Caesar noticed such things. "I did not mean to disturb you." I looked away. "It's only that it's so close in the villa, and I felt if I did not get some air I should scream."

"That would hardly do," he said with a strange half smile, the left side of his mouth pulling more than the right. "I expect it would alarm people."

"It would," I said.

He lifted my chin with one hand. “You have the look of her." His hand was warm, and he turned my face as though it were some work of art.

“Ptolemy Auletes was eclectic in his tastes,” I said. "We were born the same year."

“Her sister as well as her servant? Interesting.” The Roman raised one eyebrow. “You are loyal to her, then?”

“Would I tell you, Imperator, if I were not?” I asked. “Surely you cannot expect naiveté from someone who serves Cleopatra Philopater? If we were any of us naïve we should be long since dead.” His face was very near mine, and the moonlight made each wrinkle a deep gravure, but his eyes were bright as stars, light reflecting. It seemed that I had dreamed this once, or perhaps that I dreamed still, sleeping beside Cleopatra and wondering how I should speak with Caesar. It was that sense of dream that made me bold. "She is the Living Isis, Her hands on earth. You must put her on the throne of Egypt. It is what she was born to do."

"No doubt it's what she wishes," Caesar said dryly, releasing my chin with the same unminding caress one would use for a cat. "Your mistress has many estimable qualities."

"Does she fascinate you, Imperator?" I asked.

“As she means to?” He turned, one eyebrow rising again. “You can tell her yes, of course she does.” He looked out over the garden. Somewhere out there in the night the river was flowing beneath the stars, the Nile rolling ever seaward, as it always had and always would. I said nothing, just waited for him to drink his fill of the night. “The pyramids are two thousand years old,” he said. “So they tell me. How old are your gods?”

"Do you care for gods, Imperator? I didn’t think Romans put much stock in such.” Certainly Gnaeus had not, and I had not known so many others closely. They seemed a supremely practical people.

“I am a priest of Jupiter,” he said lightly. “Or had you forgotten?”

“I did not know,” I said. “Perhaps there is some small flaw in our intelligence.” I came and stood beside him at the rail, looked sideways at his face. “Do you believe in pothos, like Alexander? Fata, leading you by the hand?”

“It’s a foolish man who scorns Fata,” he said. “I don’t think even my enemies have called me foolish.”

“No,” I said. “That’s not the thing they’ve named you.” Rebel, traitor, tyrant, a man with no regard for law, a man who would be king -- all those things had been said and more. But no man had called him foolish, at least not in a very long time. But what did he believe? If any man knew that, they did not speak of it.

Caesar looked vaguely amused. “And does Cleopatra wish a second Alexander to swoop down upon her enemies like a plunging falcon? To raise new temples in her honor? A royal wedding and a Caesarid dynasty?”

“You have named it, not I,” I said, but a shiver ran down my back.

He laughed, a pleasant enough sound. “She wishes to know these things. Why does she send you to ask me?”

I must gamble. The stakes were too high not to. “Because you will tell me,” I said, certainty in my voice.

“And why will I do that?”

“Because you have known me for a thousand years. I have died in your service. I have saved your life when your enemies sought you, and I have killed a man across your funeral bier.” I held his eyes, and in his face I saw it again, the funeral cortege making its way down a mountain road. “We carried you to Memphis in a coffin of gold and laid you among the sacred kings, beside the bulls of Serapis until your city was ready. You may not remember, waking, this side of the River, but I think that you do know. I think you know much more than you pretend.”

Caesar tilted his head to the side, his face unreadable. “Strange,” he said quietly. “You look Greek, with your fair hair."

"I am all Egypt," I said. "Egypt as she is now, Black Land and Red Land and City together. You have come home to your place, Imperator, and she greets you as a lover long absent and much missed. Do not scorn Fata, or the words of the gods."

“Now you are the voice of a goddess, not a slave?”

“We are all more than we seem, Divine Julius, the Son of Venus,” I said. “Are you not descended from Venus through that Trojan tossed over sea and land by the enmity of Juno, until at last he came to Italian shores and took up his long destiny?"

He threw his head back and laughed, long thin throat exposed. “I should take this then as a caution against sparring with Cleopatra. If the handmaiden is so practiced in arms, I should beware your mistress!"

I inclined my head. “Perhaps you should. But you have not answered my question.”

“Nor will I. Now,” he said, and smiling walked away.

I waited until he was gone. He had answered. I knew what I had come to find out.

Comments

( 21 comments — Leave a comment )
[info]tltrent wrote:
Mar. 15th, 2009 04:13 pm (UTC)
Aaaaaah...Brilliant, just brilliant. I cannot wait to get my hands on this. Thank you for the lovely snippet!
[info]jo_graham wrote:
Mar. 16th, 2009 02:55 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you liked it!
[info]faerie_writer wrote:
Mar. 15th, 2009 04:16 pm (UTC)
*puts Hand of Isis on TBR list*
[info]jo_graham wrote:
Mar. 16th, 2009 02:55 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I hope you enjoy it!
[info]kethlenda wrote:
Mar. 15th, 2009 05:16 pm (UTC)
Yes! One of the things I loved, and didn't manage to get into words, was that I didn't feel like I'd read this story before. Even though I was super-addicted to the tv show Rome and have read Margaret George's Cleopatra doorstopper 3 or 4 times and know a fair amount about the history of the period. Between the avoidance of the moments that are so famous that they're almost "set pieces", and the Charmian POV, it was fresh.

The way you told Caesar's assassination was great. Charmian just knowing it and the way she was observing every minute detail of the house and thinking, Now. It didn't tell the story the way anyone else has told it, and it worked well for Charmian's characterization, too. She doesn't want to See these things, yet at the same time the fact that she did helped her get everyone out safely.

So I was wondering, did they release the book around the Ides on purpose? ;)

Edited at 2009-03-15 05:24 pm (UTC)
[info]jo_graham wrote:
Mar. 16th, 2009 03:04 pm (UTC)
I'm glad it seemed fresh to you. That is really one of the big challenges, especially when doing something so well known as Cleopatra, or my next one, Alexander the Great. Readers have an expectation, and it has to fill that expectation while at the same time doing something different. Very much like fanfic that way! You have to take familiar characters and historical "canon" and make them somehow new again.

Charmian doesn't want to See, no. She'd rather not know, something I'm sure many of us can sympathize with. But, as you point out, it's that ability that makes it possible to get everyone out safely. She and Emrys are completely on the same page there. (In the next book, we'll see the last time they did this!)

I have no idea if they released it around the Ides on purpose! I never actually thought of that!
[info]djarum99 wrote:
Mar. 15th, 2009 06:32 pm (UTC)
Because you have known me for a thousand years.

An amazing and critical scene, and I love your Caesar.

I received word two days ago that Amazon was shipping the book! I want to read it again in order to do justice to a review. Congratulations ♥
[info]jo_graham wrote:
Mar. 16th, 2009 03:06 pm (UTC)
Yay! I hope you enjoy it (again)! It's rather different fully revised.

I love Caesar too. Probably why we're going to see so much more of him!
[info]azarias wrote:
Mar. 15th, 2009 10:36 pm (UTC)
I went to order my copy of HoI off of Amazon, and Amazon told me that Bright Dark Madonna is out, which I hadn't realized. Each book is being recommended on the other's page. Best. Shopping. Ever.
[info]kethlenda wrote:
Mar. 16th, 2009 03:55 am (UTC)
Omgyay! I need to go get Bright Dark Madonna!
[info]jo_graham wrote:
Mar. 16th, 2009 03:07 pm (UTC)
Oh cool! And I hope you enjoy it!
[info]fried_flamingo wrote:
Mar. 16th, 2009 12:11 am (UTC)
I think this is something that struck me with Black Ships, but especially stands out in this novel. How you treat those iconic moments with an intimate hand, and how you deal with the repercussions and reactions on a personal level; it's about the characters rather than the event itself. (Although when I turned the page an saw the Ides of March chapter heading, I got such a morbid little thrill! :D)


Not quite finished the story yet, but almost there. I'm enthralled by your character portraits - they're just so real and human, especially Charmian, and I'm more than a little in love with Emrys.

Once again I'm both impatient to get to the end of the story, but reluctant to say goodbye to these characters.



Edited at 2009-03-16 12:14 am (UTC)
[info]jo_graham wrote:
Mar. 16th, 2009 03:09 pm (UTC)
That's very much what I'm trying to do, and I'm glad it worked. I think that's one of the advantages of the tight first person -- it's not about the big picture of the political situation in Rome, it's about what this means for Charmian and her family. This is about the people she loves, not just world-spanning events.

Tissues. *hands you a virtual box* I can't get through the end without a box of tissues.

I love Emrys too. He's one of my favorites, all around. What did you think of Emrys and Dion?
[info]kethlenda wrote:
Mar. 16th, 2009 03:11 pm (UTC)
What did you think of Emrys and Dion?

Pardon the threadjack, but...Emrys and Dion...I can haz? ;)
[info]jo_graham wrote:
Mar. 16th, 2009 03:22 pm (UTC)
You can threadjack!

I love Emrys and Dion! We'll see them again in several places and times, I think. I have a lovely pair of short stories for them, in 1800 and 1810. Dion makes a fetching debutante! *g*
[info]fried_flamingo wrote:
Mar. 16th, 2009 09:08 pm (UTC)
I have a lovely pair of short stories for them, in 1800 and 1810. Dion makes a fetching debutante!

*squees* Where can we expect to read these stories?
[info]jo_graham wrote:
Mar. 17th, 2009 01:16 pm (UTC)
I just put the first one up, just for you! I'll put the second one up tomorrow.
[info]fried_flamingo wrote:
Mar. 16th, 2009 09:06 pm (UTC)
Oh no! I don't want to need tissues! Can't I just keep them all packed away safe in a box? With bubble wrap?? But I suppose as soon as I read the opening scene in Amenti it was clear you were going to just break all our hearts. *prepares self*

With regards to Emrys and Dion, I'll second [info]kethlenda's request - I can haz?? Their relationship is just so beautiful (as is their relationships, both individually and together, with Charmian). But the part where I knew I was just hopelessly in love with this pairing was this moment:

"It was so in Abydos," he said. "It was art, rehearsed and planned. And yet..."

I looked to see why he trailed off. Emrys was coming through the crowd toward him, excusing himself to the people who stood in the way.

"I'm back," he said, and his eyes lingered on Dion's face.

"I see that," said Dion. He had forgotten all else with his forgotten thought.

"I hope you've been well," Emrys said.

"Yes. Fine. And you?"

But that was not what their eyes said.

- *swoons* So subtle and yet so perfect. From this point onward I was just a happy little Dion/Emrys shipper.
[info]jo_graham wrote:
Mar. 17th, 2009 01:16 pm (UTC)
You can haz! *G*

Dion/Emrys is a good ship!
[info]lilifae wrote:
Mar. 23rd, 2009 03:54 pm (UTC)
The scenes with the three of them = complete and utter magic. I loved the book to bits and can't actually wait to re-read it. In fact, I want to re-read Black Ships too because I think I missed out on a lot of what happened in there.
[info]jo_graham wrote:
Mar. 28th, 2009 01:26 am (UTC)
I'm so glad you liked those scenes! They were very challenging to write, but I'm happy with how they came out.
( 21 comments — Leave a comment )